Aside from the picture, your penmanship is deplorable.
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actually, I agree, my hand writing sucks. now you know why I usually type out any words in my art. X3
I have too admit that your penmenship could use some work. The rest isn't so bad for simple sketches.
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Well ill post a comment then , the thing is and i dont wanna be rude but its not that good , you dont shade and you dont fill it all up theres till a lot of white spots in places it shouldnt be
all i can say is practice more try drawing pictures and get the shading right more details more shading more contrast
also you have a lot of straight lines , try and go for an organic look with curves and things
go to youtube and look at how other people draw analyse how they do it and implement it into your own style
of something doesnt seem right the first time keep going try to fix whats wrong
ive drawn things where i see a huge mistake but i try and fix it , its still there but other people dont notice it
just dont give up and keep practising also i dont know what pencil you use but i use a B , 2B or 3B those seem the best for drawing natural looking things , go softer and its to dark go harder ( H and up) it cuts into the paper and you cant erase it anymore
also dont press to hard on your pencil , work in layers it takes long i know ive worked hours on a drawing before but it makes it look good layer per layer
sorry that its not really cathegorised but i just wrote what came up in my mind
i wish you good luck with your drawing
just remember practice is the key to success , trust me
folf182 (Updated )
thanks, man. it means alot. the lines are probably too dark because I outlined it with a pen though, guess it wasn't as good a idea as I thought. anyway, I'll watch some drawing tutorials on YouTube and see how it's done. thanks for the suggestion!